The Southend Messi

[sportinessex.com]

I have not seen Jack play but he sounds like a very decent prospect.

The Southend Messi... http://www.sportinessex.com/TheSouthendMessi …

 

[southend4ever]

I don't like the article focusing on why he hasn't been played sooner? You could argue that by holding him back we are reaping the benefits of what he is now producing. Why does it need a negative twist on a positive story?

 

[Ayrshire Blue]

Jesus, was that really the best photo you could find of him?

 

[Pubey]

Wow. Two youngish lads write a good piece and the first two comments are negative!

Good stuff! Take the criticism as positive criticism!

 

[Uncle Leo]

Jesus, was that really the best photo you could find of him?

It's better than Wiki's picture of Denis Irwin

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Denis_Irwin

 

[amsemp]

It's better than Wiki's picture of Denis Irwin

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Denis_Irwin

Absolutely amazing :hilarious:

 

[THE SEVENTIES NORTH BANK]

JP was crowded out on saturday, and hardly had a shot. Lets hope he has more space against Morecambe and gets to run at players and get those shots in. I also like the way he hangs back for the backward pass or rebound on the edge of the penalty area when Coulthirst or Weston have bombed forward with the ball.

 

[Bearded Shrimper]

Absolutely amazing :hilarious:

:hilarious::hilarious:

even my mrs laughed and i had to explain who Denis Irwin is for her to get it.

 

[Bkdside]

Think that's a pretty poor article to be honest.

 

[chapperzUK]

Wow. Two youngish lads write a good piece and the first two comments are negative!

Good stuff! Take the criticism as positive criticism!

We've won 4 on the trot, what else can we moan about?

 

[Pubey]

Think that's a pretty poor article to be honest.

Step up and write a blog or article for SZ/AAS if you think you can do better.

Let's try and frame any criticism in a more considered way, especially when talking about fellow SUFC fans.

 

[mrsblue]

Step up and write a blog or article for SZ/AAS if you think you can do better.

Let's try and frame any criticism in a more considered way, especially when talking about fellow SUFC fans.

Agreed.

I thought the piece was fairly good.

 

[Greebosan]

It's a good starting article for those that wrote it - well done for having a go and putting it out there - look forward to seeing more of the same :thumbsup:

 

[Uncle Leo]

Indeed, good stuff lads. Best thing to do with writing is write some more. And when you've done that, write even more. And then more after that. Practice may not make perfect, but it certainly makes much better. A certain Mr Slipperduke took that approach and it's turned out rather well for him...

 

[davewebbsbrain]

Think that's a pretty poor article to be honest.

Really? I'd be more inclined to say your posts are pretty poor.

 

[chapperzUK]

Indeed, good stuff lads. Best thing to do with writing is write some more. And when you've done that, write even more. And then more after that. Practice may not make perfect, but it certainly makes much better. A certain Mr Slipperduke took that approach and it's turned out rather well for him...

Agreed, also reading can help with writing articles - might seem obvious, but some obvious things do get overlooked. I used to do a blog with someone years ago and it was quite enjoyable, so keep it up lads. :thumbsup:

 

[Bkdside]

Pubey...No thanks. I'm not a journalism or a wanna be journalist. I appreciate your invite though.

 

[Orell]

Jesus, was that really the best photo you could find of him?

Indeed, good stuff lads. Best thing to do with writing is write some more. And when you've done that, write even more. And then more after that. What is happening with https://donkeybets.com/my-zcode-system-review the ZCode? Practice may not make perfect, but it certainly makes much better. A certain Mr Slipperduke took that approach and it's turned out rather well for him...

Ha yeah, the least they could do is post a photo that doesn't make him look like a complete muppet. If there are any..:facepalm:

 

[Shrimpers are Magic]

Think that's a pretty poor article to be honest.

I'd have been happy to have written that at 16 TBH. Some of the tripe I come out with, I'd be happy with that now!

 

[Shrimpers are Magic]

It's better than Wiki's picture of Denis Irwin

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Denis_Irwin

That has to be a City fan who's done that!